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A lot of repetition. They say that the MC gets beat up by the story's protagonist four or five times before it actually could happen; and when mentioned it's completely unrelated to what's currently happening in the story. Seems as if the writer thinks the readers forgot about it the first two times.Most of the story is telling the events of what already happened in another story. And the little that does happen is just the repeated surprise of people towards his changed behavior. The actual events of the story are boring because there is no risk or challenge since he already has knowledge of the world from reading about it. What's the point of isekai, of transporting to another world if you already know everything that's going to happen? Wouldn't that be boring?Repeats that he can be shameless because everyone already has a low opinion of him and that that is supposed to be a great thing. He could still do that even if everyone thought he was great. The truly great thing about being shameless is not caring about what people think. I think the writer was trying to say that but wanted to be more original.The first volume of death flags was interesting because the MC and his family were basically evil, so he had to right wrongs without being found out that he had changed. While the MC of this story revels in being lazy and staying out of the way. Which one sounds more interesting for a story and main character?