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This is my first time writing a review, and English is not my native language, so please forgive me if there are minor or even major errors in my review.At first I didn't think that I will really enjoy reading this because this kind of plot line is common nowadays, but after reading a few chapters I somehow began to be immersed more and more with the flow of the story.Now I will say this, this review is from my point of view and everyone have their one taste of stories, so don't blame me if it's not to your liking because every person have their likes and dislikes and also how come I know what your preference is, it's your own choice on reading it so please don't blame me or others or even the Author/Translator okay? :DNow let's continue...1. At the start with how the MC know how the future will became–because he has reading the novel which is the novel about the world he got transmigrated in–at first it may lack of fighting scene (for the mc) and it may seem boring, but as each event goes on, it is bound for the MC to not know about what will happend in the future anymore, because the MC is not yet to finish the novel that he's been reading, he need to overcome every events that will come in the future, and he able to do that because he is, indeed, an intelligent character, and he able to do every scenario thanks to his big brain and scammer mind.Do not need to worry about action scene, as he bound to change the plot line with his every action (not like he really mind about it) , some things will not happen as what the event in the original novel goes, he have to clean every mess that he has made (even though he don't like it much lol) , and so with how he will not be able to know anything about the future anymore, at that point, there will be MANY fighting scene with the MC taking parts of it, I will not tell you clearly about the specific of the word 'many' is, but the thing that you need to know is that– Even though he want a slacker life, and with the reason why he always sticking to the worrisome scene even though he doesn't want to, is because with so many things happened around him, he can't just be relaxed, he need to FULLY clean every worrisome things so that his dream about being a wealthy-slacker person without anything to disturb him will became true, but, as things goes on, we can see that his slacker life has been thrown away to the tr*sh-bin since long ago, as he always makes another baggage to be brought along. (lmao) "His face (/his dream) has been slapped hard by fate into a broken pieces of glass plate." (You will understand what I was talking about after reading the novel into the late chapter xD) 2. The novel is not just about some random person who suddenly got transmigrated to another world without any specific reason. On the late chapter, we will be explained about the reason as to how Cale, or as I may say, Kim Rok Soo, suddenly got transmigrated into this world, the world of a novel which he has read in the meantime.3. The Author like to give some tiny bits of foreshadowing about the future with each sentence she makes. And I really like this part of this novel, because after I was done reading into the late chapter, and began to re-read it again, you will slowly notice that some sentence have something to do with the events that will happen/or take place in the future. You will start to became more immersed in the story than before, you will more often notice some small tiny details with each characters' words from their pov's, or with the narrative says, you will even notice the little typo the Translator have made because of you became too immersed in the story for the sake of finding every foreshadowing the Author gives to the readers xDIt will give you the pleasure in reading the novel after you noticing that small detail, really, and it happened because the Author making us realizing that tiny bits of foreshadowing that she gave to us to became fully immersed in the story. It was a really fun experience for me because it was all new to me, reading this kind of novel, well, for me at least.4. This novel have no romance or so whatsover, so if you doesn't like this kind of genre, please leave, because as what the genre on the novel's info says 'Action, Adventure, Comedy, Fantasy, and Shounen.'This novel did not include a romance/love interest, it's mainly contained in 'familial love' or even 'platonic relationship.' It may be a good tea for the people who like this kind of settings, but for the people who does not like this kind of settings, I will gently advise you to leave rather than to nagging on the comment section or at the community post or even on the review... Please don't use a place to give review with some bothersome things, please? :'D5. As the story goes on, we might think about 'How can he remember clearly about everything that occurs in the novel BoAH?'. This thing, my friend, will be explained at the late chapter, too. And the Author will also explained later about the 'place' that was our MC living before he transmigrated. As the story goes, we will be explained in tiny bits about the life of Kim Rok Soo's live before, and, let me advice you, don't NEVER EVER skip that part, because it was a foreshadowing for the future chapters, don't uderestimate the explanation that the Author gaves, because like I've said before... Is that the Author like, I mean, REALLY like to give us some foreshadowing, and you may regreted on not looking at it clearly if you really want to enjoy the story, because every word the Author use, almost every sentence have it's own meaning.6. Story and Character DevelopmentThere are someone in the review who says :"The MC tends to spoil everything in one go, and the novel tends to put in too little effort on developing the story and characters properly, making it feel too fast. Too little content is placed in to make it feel more like a slow burn, as the author skips around with describing certain scenes. It really makes you not care about the side characters."Well, I guess this person does not read this novel until the late chapter, and I also GUESS that this person just make a review here to make the ratings of this novel goes down, fck it. _: (´ཀ`」 ∠) :
- "The MC tends to spoil everything in one go, and the novel tends to put in too little effort on developing the story and characters properly–" : I don't know what does this person mean by 'tends to spoil everything in one go', it may be true that the MC give so many explanation to everything that happened in the novel that he's read, but it's not like that everything in the story must go with the same plot line that was in the original novel, the novel (we read) need to be grow further with each events that was happening in the later part, so with the things that was starting to appears because this is a 'world' he's living in, and not in the novel, things are bound to be more complicated and the plot started thickening.It's not like we can always stay with the plot in the original novel, so it's no use in dily dalying with things that are in the novel our dear MC read before. It was the Author's way in making the story goes further than before, the things started to became deep and needed to be explained, and with every foreshadowing the Author give with almost every sentence she makes, this novel/story will be a long ride for use readers, so it's not good for the Author to still be in the plot line (or arc) of the original novel... I mean like come on man, even the Author said that this 1-700+ Chapters is only the part one, with the things that was left behind and needed to be explained, how long does this novel will take us to? ¯\_ (ツ) _/¯
- "–the novel tends to put in too little effort on developing the story and characters properly, making it feel too fast. Too little content is placed in to make it feel more like a slow burn, as the author skips around with describing certain scenes. It really makes you not care about the side characters." : Like I've said before, the Author tends to give some foreshadowing on ALMOST every sentence she makes, even if it was skipped, it was not forgotten. That was why on this 1-700+ chapters, the Author had said that it was ONLY the part one, there are still more, and we just need to wait patiently, this is what make us readers anticipate for the next chapter, it was the element that the Author place in this novel so that the story will last longer and to not be boring for us readers. So the content she've placed to us is not too little, in fact, it was too much to the point that we might also cough of blood just like YMSS-nim because of all the foreshadowing in this novel................ Anyway–