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《EDT》there's some pros and cons, I agree with both side that said this was (quiet) good and bad + the plot and story background, in the early chapter were quiet nonsense but some was revealed with reasonable story building (e.g., a tortured dragon since birth by a less-than duke-title heir) - the character building was a bit lacking compared to it (e.g., MC didn't undergo rebirth but isekai-ed and possessed an adult body. While it's ok, I don't get it why og family didn't feel weird about the 'new Cale', especially his butler and the chef... they're a very observant character. It's either a plot-hole or KRS had same 'characteristic' such as habit, walking, unconscious reaction toward something, etc. They just admitted it 'new Cale' changed his attitude - at the beginning, lot of useless words were used as word-fillers (e.g., "The two of them, no, all three of them..." ; " (name) didn't know but (another name) 's (....) is (....) because (name) 's gaze is 1. Already turned back to the another one, or 2. Staring at the plate, and so on.") + starting from whale arc, it's gotten better- but starting from c400ish, it's chewing-gum to milk legal readers. (This was on early c400ish, when the protag-mage had a 'duel' of being the 'strongest' than other as mage, iirc it took 2-3 or 4 chapters to finish that boring event. Yes, it could be skip, just read the beginning and the last description and you won't skip any story. In short it's like seeing two students compare their exams score and whose the highest) - 'wrong' imagination/words-selected (e.g., ".... the kittens wagged their tails" or something because the kitten supposed to be very interested in something. They're not dog. ; apparently the baby dragon had soft paw...) - in the early chapters, "Hoo ha hoo ha ah tsk" were like salt, too many put into one plate and the taste was not good.- I don't get 'Cale' body anatomy. He was alcoholic and tr*sh but apparently he's not like that beer-bellied typical bxstrxd *shrug, afaik he even ended up not being a lean ripped man but more like an idol-body (?) based on the desc. when it's written he loss more muscle compared to 1st day as 'Cale'- the biggest flaw/nonsense was almost no one died if they're needed to be saved to [give reaction] Spoiler
'They are crying with joy that they are alive! Chaos, destruction, happiness!'
'They all seem to have gotten scared after seeing the black mages. They seem happy that they were able to be saved.'
[collapse] — it's just a bunch of extra, taken as hostages, and yeah bother not killing them... they're just for 'bxllshxt talks'. Those were war, but it's completely one-sided while the power was 50:50 when the antagonist White Star entered the chat. What I meant was the enemy had lot of causalties, but the allies only exhausted and worn out, but almost never in mortal danger... that's including the so-called 'citizen' I just can't imagine how the layout of the war to be like that :/