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The beginning was great. A reincarnated butler solely focused on the happiness of whom he serves.The problems arise when you read some more into the story and it becomes obvious that the world revolves around the him. The heroine of the otome game has fallen in love with him, which while I'm sure sounds like great material for conflict, the problem arises from how the main character of this story (butler; not hero of the game) contradicts himself. For exampleSpoiler
One chapter he refuses to dance with Alicia (otome game heroine) because it would displease his master. But not two more chapter's in he decides to escort her to a party.
[collapse]Also there is a major lack of payoff for now, where no one is bad and everyone is just misunderstood. This does not make for great story telling (though let it be said, I'm not an expert).P.S. Did I mention that the MC is a gary stu. He is the best at everything at and anything, no problem too big for him.