Addicted Pampering You: The Mysterious Pampered Wife of The Military Ye Chapter 251 Discussion

This novel is written pretty well, but there is too much happening in this novel. I am dropping it for now after having read about half the novel, which I rarely do. I did also read the chapters after 500 (So I skipped 250 ch). I'm just not into it right now. Perhaps I will continue reading it later, and perhaps I will never pick it up again.

To me it feels like writer wanted to put too much in 1 novel.

If you like that, then perhaps you'll really like this novel.

There are too many couples to follow who each have their own story. I prefer to only have the main couple as a focal point. It's fine if there is another side couple, but there are too many in this novel. You have

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Shen Qinglan x Fu Hengyi (MC x ML)

Fang Tong x Li Boming

Yu Xiaoxuan x Han Yi

Shen Junyu x Wen Yanyao

Yang Xi x doctor Doug I assume

Daniel x hacker friend ???

Jiang Chengxi x Jan Yining

Eden x Su Qing

Gu Yang x Tao Ran

The next gemeration in extra's:

Lin Jing x Lu Feng

Fu Yixuan x Gu Qingzhu (=Song Bin)

Fu Shuyi x Bai Junnan

Hao Hao x Han Nanyan

Shen Junze x Wang Ning

Part of above names are taken from MTL. The names might change when translated.

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And then there are too many people with mental / health problems. Several are very understandable, but for me writer again just wants to put too many in 1 novel.

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Shen Qinglan body has problems because of her treatment during training in assassin camp

Chu Yunrong (MC's mother) depressed because of the kidnapping of her daighter

Shen grandmother died

Fu grandfather fell from stairs and had bleeding in head

Shen grandfather had stroke because of son who left 20 years ago and came back

Yu Xiaoxuan's parents die in accident

Yang Xi gets kidnapped and r*ped causing her mental health to completely break down

Allen (leader of assassin camp) obsessed with MC

Wen Yanyao's admirer from the Du family obsessed with her

Qin Hao obsessed with deat Allen's father

Shen Xi obsessed with ML

Gu Jiajia obsessed with Duan Ling

Chen Yujiao gets hit by a car when saving Yan Yining. Might never have children because of that. The culprit is Gu Jiajia

Lu Jincai tried to get Shen Junze killed in a car accident

Lawrence, a leader of an underground organisation is obsessed with Su Qing (=Qing Mo), who looks just like his sister.

Fu Shuyi roommate

And I'm sure I missed many more because I read only half of the novel.

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Many times it felt like MC would come out with her healing skills to help these people. Kidding. This MC has no medical skills, but I see these things often happen in novels where MC is a doctor and she has to come to the rescue.

And then the way MC handled her kidnapping. I assume writer wanted to show how tough she is, but it felt very unprofessional to me. But who am I.

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King, the leader of the BK mercenary team that lost a few times against ML who is in the army, decides to kidnap a few friends of MC to get his hands on MC and through her, get his hands on ML. MC follows the kidnappers (so far so good), but then gets a phone call to go to a certain place to meet them. She does this without real backup. Her assassin friends are at home keeping in contact, but that's it. She doesn't alert her husband, who is in the army and might have been a big help with his team. They might have been able to bring helicopters, and sharpshooters. And this though she promised him several times she would warn him whenever she encountered problems. She meets the kidnappers and wants to exchange herself for her 2 kidnapped friends. They tell her to drink a sleeping drink and she does, not knowing if they will release her friends (even though they are known as ruthless). And guess what, they don't release Yang Xi, who gets r*ped by them later on. And she is taken away and tortured by them.

Doesn't this tell everyone that later on they will just have to kidnap one of MC's friends to get their hands on her. I see this more often in novels, but don't understand this. Especially when MC is supposed to be a professional. But again perhaps that's just me.

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Then there is the son of Grandpa Shen, Shen Zhong. He went against his parents wishes and married a girl he fell in love with and left. And everything in the novel is about how this son was wrong. How is it wrong to want to marry someone you fall in love with? And from what I can tell they were happily married during all these years. She might have been somewhat weak in character from what I understand, but she was not evil or something like that. He might have tried to get in contact with his parents sooner, but they told him he wouldn't be part of their family anymore if he married her. They talk about how he made the Shen family lose face when he didn't marry Fu Jingjing, but is that more important than the happiness of your son? I didn't understand this. But perhaps those are cultural differences.

Added later. After reading the extra's I do have to admit that Shen Zhong's wife probably would have caused a lot of problems for the family because she can't stand up to her brother but still didn't like it.