The Death Mage Who Doesn’t Want a Fourth Time Chapter 40 Discussion

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This novel has many of the shortcomings light novels tend to always have. The author rambles on about unimportant things too often; the text is extremely bloated.

I get that the MC had tough previous lifes, but bringing it up every single chapter is just annoying. It's so overdone that I just start skipping entire sections when I see the pity party start to happen. At this point it's just cringy.

Just like every other isekai/reincarnation novel, Japanese food comes up every other chapter, and it ends up just being food p*rn and about how much everyone looooves it. Which is s*upid and naive. In reality when you try to introduce foods that people have never seen before, not many will actually end up liking it.

Most cringy of all are the frequent sections where we hear all about how amazing MC is as everyone gets in a circle and jerks it off to their new god, the 3 year old child.
 
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