- #1
One chapter is pretty long compared to average, so the chapters that I've read should be plenty enough to determine the style and potential.1. Initially the author tried to be in depth in world and character building, but soon after he contradicts that style by spouting nonsense and a complete 180° change of MC's personality, which is an instant turn off for most readers.Imagine seeing John Wick becomes a complete sissy and doesn't kill the villains who killed his loved ones. That's the exact situation and personality our MC has.Spoiler
MC's mother got tormented in public, laughed at, and burned alive at stake. MC even immediatly develop mental corruption skill from level 1 straight to 10 by learning what happened to his mother. By this point readers are all excited for a massive revenge plot, right? But no, just a few chapter later, MC turned into a completely soft hypocrite. He doesn't kill the villagers who discriminated his non-human mother but just punish them by destryong the village's farm and walls...
[collapse]2. The age progression is very slow and the illogical sense of morality is messed up even if it's a fantasy. The MC is still under 1 year old baby for f*ck sake. But the author makes almost all the woman he encountered to fall for him. The reason for this is a passive undead charm skill as a death mage, but wtf? Imagine a nearly 300 years old lolibaba who already has grandchildren and usually had s*x with huge beastman-like male feeling dokidoki against a baby with less than 1 year of age.3. Many more too mention, but from what I've read, I can only conclude this novel as something that is written by amateur young teenager boy. The writing style is better than most other average isekai, but is still a mess the more I read it.