The Death Mage Who Doesn’t Want a Fourth Time Chapter 203 Discussion

Problem People Have With This Novel

1. The god of reincarnation messing up

Ex:The god of reincarnation and other gods are not omnipotent and can be kill

There are more than one god and the god of reincarnation view everyone to be below him.

2. The MC is not taking revenge

Ex: He said he will massacre the other reincarnated people was purely out of anger at that moment and as he think about it and calm down he figure that they are not truly responsible for his death and will let them be.Spoiler

He kill and destroy the soul of any one of the reincarnated if they mess with him or the one he care about.

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3. The MC is to nice

Ex:He only help other if it doesn’t hurt his benefit or the benefit of him friend

Are you going to let a women get r*pe in front of you when you can save them or kill everyone in sight even if they are innocentSpoiler

The town people are unharmed if you consider destroy the wall protecting them from monster getting out scott-free

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4. The MC is s*upid

Ex:Spoiler

Yes he turn the wall into golem but who would suspect a 0 year old baby to be the cause

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The MC is not the most intelligent but can you say that you can come up with the perfect decision every time in rage and sadness with limited information about the world? The MC does not have a god like view like the reader

Also there are more s*upid MC in xuanhuan who just charge in or can’t take any criticism. A person block their road, enemy has to be kill. Someone look at his girl who is pretty, enemy has to be kill. Some talk down to him, enemy has to be kill and when their elder come kill them to.

5. The MC has an inferiority complex

Ex: Try to have no cheat, experience from previous life carry over and can’t earn exp independently while facing one hundred reincarnated individuals who all have cheat and experience from their previous life carry over and can earn exp independently and see if you develop a inferiority complex. Oh did I mention have a ab*se family in your first life and being a experimental human in your second life deprived of your freedom to move and speech. Yes the MC have enormous amount of mana but it magic are like pipe only so much can mana can be use at once otherwise the magic are not going to activate or completely fail and pure mana have few to no damaging potential. The death attributed mana is op is some sense but it not combat oriented type, yes it can do ton of damage but it not like it will do that much against every enemy.

6. Slow start

Ex: The start has to built up their character, motive, enemy, and the world so of course it will be somewhat slow. The pacing in my opinion is good since I hate most xuanhuan who develop so quickly that every chapters is about battle and training and have little to no built up.

7. The character are not developed

Ex: Each of the character in this story have development even the side character or the villain. Most of the development happen in side story or end of volume character summary with some development in the story to.

8. MC is getting all the beautiful girl and they want his baby

Ex: First of all he does not get all the beautiful girl in the first place which will become clear later on. But the one he does get are mostly of Spoiler

Vida race and believe in Vida the goddess of “life and love” a goddess who give birth to over a hundreds new race and is a f**k goddess of love so of course they are like that. If you read about the Ghoul you know that they don’t even know what are marriage and just have s** with whomever they want. Yes he did turn a girl corpse into a zombie but it latter show that she was more like a sister to him. If you discriminate against a girl just because they are undead is just like discriminating a human of another color just because of their outside appearance.

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9. Large Cast

Ex: Yes it is a pain in the bu*t but most of the character are distinct from one another and play a role in helping to built the story.

10. MC enemy are s*upid

Ex: Have you see any novel who all the villain are very smart, the answer is most likely no. Do you think a religious lunatic will has some 300 IQ showing or do you think people who control the underworld with power that rival a kingdom will bother with some high thought out plan. You have to understand that the villain have no clue what the power of the MC are and how unthinkable they are.Spoiler

The ability to create a wall made of only golem who can break off at will, repairing artifacts that was once destroy, tame undead, break his opponents souls which was impossible even for the gods and have death attributed mana which was never seem before.

[collapse] Most of the beginning chapter are like that because to other the MC power are a complete mystery. Also do you think that they will give it their all on a child?

11. Japanese food

Ex: It clearly explains latter on that there are Spoiler

rice and other food are there since the champion was also from a “Earth” with similar culture or history and they desire such food.

[collapse] The author is Japanese so naturally his writing favor Japanese traditions and food such as Chinese novel or Korean novel favor their own country above the rest. If what you eat mostly are Japanese food then when you write about food it will be mostly Japanese. The MC does want cola though.

12. MC mother death is pointless

Ex: The MC mother death is a large driving force for a good chunk of the story and was the main cause of most of the MC action.

13. Translation Speed

There nothing to say other than it to inconsistent and slow now.