Not in Vain Chapter -- Discussion

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Surprisingly good!

This gets the jobs done in 40-ish chapters, what other stories take 150+

It's not too complicated. You might yell at the ML a few times though as a lot of drama could have been avoided if he just opened his freaking mouth and told the MC his plans.

Still, a decent read.
 
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