- #1
It had a good start and the MC is good but I feel he's too much of a pushover. I mean no matter how nice you are, to be sooo good to your s*upid roommate to the point of cooking whenever he asks you to but the guy never does anything for you, it just leaves a bad impression on me on how he chooses friends. As for the ML, okay, though his liking towards MC came abruptly, I can accept it but when he goes all narcissistic on how "I SHOULD be stronger than him", "I HAVE to be protecting him", and "He SHOULDN'T have somebody get close to him", I felt like come on dude, he's stronger than you and he also has a life, give him space, what happened to you being a major general that's supposed to be working! And MC, come on dude, stop going along with what he wants, do you really have no thoughts just because he's your TAOIST COMPANION. Like if you need to do something, why go the hard way just cause he doesn't want to seperate from you for such a close distance. So, in truth, I pretty much don't like hos best friend and ML.So that's it for my rant...As for the good part of this story, it's probably every other character. I really love the older brothers and wish they were in the story more. The personality of their agents were more interesting than ML for me.I don't know if I'll finish this story because it gets a bit tiring to read when it gets this long, probably will read the other parts when I can get over how annoying ML is.