- #1
The plot is pretty easy the MC build his kingdom on an desert island and for various reason he gets mosters as subject but the novel has a lot of flaws.Spoiler
- Pretty much everything happen because the MC find special ore/stone in the mines. This would be ok but the island contein 99% of the world ore.
- The MC is Op for no reason. He was the weakest of the entire family and after using 483838 magic stone he simply surpassed his fathers/brothers.
- Killing some flying bird created more problem than Killing the Leviathan (most powerfull moster of the sea)
- Ascending stone make moster "evolve" cool right? Nope 2 goblin girls became beatiful human girls, why? God only know. An Orc became of course a beatiful human with wings. So theres no evolution they get a race change and some s*upid buff.
- For now there are 3 major race in the island Kobolds, Orcs and Goblins. Now this would be ok but these races are MORTAL ENEMY of each others. They were in constant war for no reason and one of the kobolds even killed the goblin general sons but ofc the MC is the Pope and now they are all friends.
