- #1
I'm used to bad plotted out novels as they usually have something going for them either with a simple power fantasy MC, world building, interesting side characters or just a plain fun story or imagination exciting setting. This one however does not.A reviewer mentioned this can be likened to someone's lone island Minecraft and if it centered on that it'd be fine and enjoyable. The little elements he has in there so far are the most memorable by far and compared to the rest of the story decently done. Sadly it lacks in the kingdom building aspect, I'd hesitate to call it city building at this chapter.The characters are largely shallow, yet they are different enough by checking many of the boxes if you're into that stuff. I can't help to see it as being largely surface level changes made with good intent (I'm giving the benefit of doubt.) This goes for all the characters, by this chapter (92) I should have one that I like and feel for but I don't.Do not over analyze the race relations aspect of the story as it's at the level of someone that has obviously not had to deal with someone of a vastly different background living next door. For instance an innocent plot devious can be taken the wrong way way to easily though it's seen in many other similar novels such as Death Mage.