Reincarnated in a Game World ~How Could I Do Something Like a Tutorial, I’m Going to Go Raise My Level!~ Chapter 22 Discussion

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I read little, so I'll give this novel some mercy and not grade it. From what I read, however, there are many signs of this novel being a typical low-level Japanese garbage.
    • Boring beginning that doesn't show any promise of things getting heated anytime soon
    • Petty events nobody cares about, very tutorialish at the start for a novel whose title says MC gonna get into action right away; why does even author start the story with MC going to an academy to train if he supposedly wants to skip the tutorial? Pointless nonsense
    • typical spineless, dense beta MC that soils his pants as soon as a girl scowls at him in jealousy after he stares at another woman and salivates (honestly, guys like this should never be harem "kings, " they are at most harem cucks coz they'd have their women stolen in a blink in reality). Oh, did I mention that he starts to betray signs of acting like an immature 13-year-old rather soon?
    • did I mention that the MC is clearly the dumbass author's garbage self-insert? It's glaringly obvious
    • MC simps in his mind for a (legal) loli at one moment, and then thinks she's meh as a girlfriend material coz he's not into lolis (bruh)
    • the setting so far makes little sense (granted, it's game world transmigration, but still)
    • I don't remember any detailed descriptions of any character's appearance in over 20 chapters, and there very well might've been none (after reading, I can only remember characteristics of one different character each, and they're really superficial like old, young for her position, pretty loli)
I don't know, man. It smells like a garbage novel to me. I have no patience for that crap anymore. If you are different and have such patience, you can go ahead and try reading this to see if it gets anywhere (or improves, for that matter). I doubt it, though.

Oh, and translation is considerably lacking. Some things are all over the place, including mistakes in both editing and translating.
 
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