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2/5 star poor written novel so far, this novel have the potential of being a decent novel but the thing is there are missing stuff and unnecessary stuff on the content. Here is the list of the missing stuff 1) The Antagonist and Bad Guy -where are they ? Already read 200+ chapters the 80% of the story was focusing on Dungeons raiding. No development of the real story progress or introducing a faction that is hostile to the MC party. 2) Missing of POV -The POV of the parents, king and queen including the noble parents of the entire MC parties. Seriously, the dialogue was always revolving the MC monologue. Not to mention the Girls of his harem party was never given a spot light unless the chapter titled "Girls talk" 3) Status Chart of the MC and his party -so far the author have not giving a chart regarding the MC party and including his own that will serve as info detail to the readers as how their status changes during the story. Even so, almost the names of the entire girls party was forgettable due to info of the girls were not provided/updated. Now, Finally the list of Unnecessary stuff on this novel : 1) The MC was an Maniac on Dungeon raiding that will nonstop being boasting himself of his game knowledge towards others which was annoying. -we know of his background story and how he end up to his current character development, but as story progresses he was a young boy that have loose mouth that wont ever stop of sharing knowledge on unrelated strangers along the way. He must be really bad hiding a secret. 2) Info dump is garbage -Surprised ? So myself, reading MC monoluge that appears more than 200+ was mind breaking and even the "blah blah blah" of his game knowledge was stretching this novel too long that seems the School arc was a long boring journey that need to be revised entirely by the author. Seriously, the author need to be reminded that he/she is writing an isekai story not an online VR story.