- #1
- The main character with an "I-know-it-all" altitude, WITHOUT ANY REAL COMBAT EXPERIENCE. Heck, Spoiler
he ridicules someone else for choosing "a terrible job", without taking into consideration the circumstances that A, everybody only got one life only,
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B, the increased stats are quite good for surviving, and C, it's rare and is probably better than what 60% of the population would have gotten. Just to show off 5 second later with his many jobs and rub it in the reader's face
- The main character with an "I-know-it-all" altitude, WITHOUT ANY REAL COMBAT EXPERIENCE. Heck, Spoiler
- The female character whose lives centered around the MC only with virtually no personality
- the side character with presences so faint you might mistaken them for ghosts (for exampleSpoiler
the loli's parent WHO JUST COOKED DINNER FOR THE MC without any question, and thoughout the dinner they didn't even utter a SINGLE WORD
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- the side character with presences so faint you might mistaken them for ghosts (for exampleSpoiler
- The world building so bad Spoiler
the forest feel like a group of trees making up a perfect circle with the center built exactly for the sole purpose of creating an encounter, and the road to the academy being nothing more than a quick travel. Heck, the only thing we know about the academy is that it's the biggest, and that's it.
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- The world building so bad Spoiler