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you can't expect somebody just swinging sword everyday will suddenly become OP, without much explanation. There's no breakthrough or realization the MC going through before he become powerful being talked in the story. They just skip it.. Yes, Skip.
I mean he can swing sword (that's good, with how much time he practice it, maybe.)
He can use magic (What?? The story didn't even explain how he came to learn magic, but he just 'suddenly' able to use magic with his sword, and again it wasn't explained how he combine the two of them)
[collapse]- VERY 1 Dimensional character.1. His parents (mom & dad) SpoilerYou can say this two characters is bad, with how little they're included in the story. I mean they disappear after only a few chapters, I don't even remember how they look or the color of their hair or anything at all.
It feels like they're here as an extras, there's no importance of them in the story after the first few chapters.
[collapse]2. THE GIRLS.I don't feel much attraction from any of these female characters.They're just a bunch of shallow characters, there's not enough characters building/explanation to figure out their personalities.Like this robot/Android girl, is she supposed to be a motherly robot or a caring elder sister type of robot, or maybe a hard working underlings robot? Whatever..3. Almost all other side characters are plain AF, his underlings only mentioned when they have an opinion about their lord (the mc), there's not even a clue about what they looks like, or how they come to be an excellent soldier from just a bunch of useless tr*shy militant.They just skip it!! YEAH unbelievable, I know.4. Crappy Villain.It seem like his enemy was an Almighty entity that can control people and have the power to send soul to other universe.But he's s*upid, the strategy he use in this story is overwhelmingly crappy that if someone tell me that it is planned by an elementary school boy, I would believe it.- And that pirates king (?) he face in the end of Volume 1 is far worse, he was mentioned for a very very short time, and out of nowhere.Then BOOM! He died after like 2 chapters maybe?What the frick man!5. Ultimate Shitty ActionAnyone remember the pirates arc of Volume 1?Yeah, let's add some crappy action on top of the crappy Villain.Any idea how the spaceships operate? Or how they exactly fight each other?All I can remember about the spaceships war is 'they're shooting laser at each other'Which one is on the losing side?How did they lose? I DON'T KNOW EITHER.Spoiler'pew pew pew pew-'
[collapse]6. THE LAST AND MOST IMPORTANT : THE GALAXY BUILDING.SpoilerAnybody remember what his galaxy name? Or maybe how much planet he has? Or maybe you remember the galaxy's economic situation? They're poor? Why? What's the cause of it?
[collapse]In my opinion (I'm really disappointed), this author is selling a borderline-scams premise.He talked about galaxy in his story? Yes.Did he show you any specific description about the galaxy? No, there's only a bunch of unclear description of it, and the MC don't even try to explore it, so it's quite clear that there would be no 'galaxy-building' in the near future.I mean the world-building is already bad, and you want to talk about the galaxy? I'm sorry but, What the frick, dude!It feels like the only knowledge he has about government isTAX and INFRASTRUCTURE.SpoilerHow much tax he get? How did he collect it? What's the percentage? What infrastructure he build? How long did it take?
[collapse]I. DON'T. KNOW!.PS: Maybe the author intended to make this story as a light comedy but from what I know, he failed, horribly.It just make me cringe, and somehow remind me that sometimes I can't just put my trust in Novel ratings..Spoiler.
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