I’m the Evil Lord of an Intergalactic Empire! Chapter v4 Discussion

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Warning!!.

This novel is comedy, therefore, it will not maintain any logic, it's also built on the basis of misunderstandings of multiple levels.

If the reader wants to read this novel because it's a "space opera", better to avoid this, since in scale, technology or variety, everything is at the level of a culture that is just exploring space and not an intergalactic empire.

Details to why it is a bad space novel

Spoiler

The MC already has access to ships and products that only the nobles can acquire and that, therefore, are almost at the pinnacle of technology.

-Even so the military ships are around a few hundred meters to a couple of kilometers (being that of a couple of kilometers and a Capital ship that are supposed to be the "largest ships" of a fleet), in the field of space novels (intergalactic cultures) military "common ships" are already handled in kilometers and only light ships are several hundred meters.


-Time is used worse than in Chinese novels, for some reason all takes decades to be education or the development of planets (it's an intergalactic empire, right?). And the author only expanded "Human Growth" so that a person will go through all the common stages but multiplying the age in hundreds, this makes a child with the appearance of 10 years already has more than 100 but is still treated as a child, In the end what is the sense of driving so much time in each jump.

-Something like access to means of treatment of losses or deformities of the body is still something that even the nobles rarely see (in an intergalactic empire)

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Details of why comedy ruins a novel even if it's a comedy novel.

Spoiler

-Jap comedy throws everything into the absurd and infringes the logic that the author himself exposes or the logic that he wants to show as the fact that it is an "interglactic empire" (but nothing shows this), even every detail is removed to give pass to the "Comical" events quickly.

-Variety and depth.

-There are "Learning Capsules", even so the MC that used it to learn how to manage its territory but for some reason does not learn that gold is something cheap and that magicals metalas are even more valuable. - Destruction of what has already been established by the author.

-The reason that the wife of the MC was unfaithful continuously is shown in all the chapters, the MC is ignorant of everything that happens around him, everything, also the MC creates his own "story" of what happens in front of him but for being comedy nothing bad will go through such a level of ignorance and his false perception of reality.

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This is basically a new version of "Dragoon" (by the same author), I hope this does not go the same way and ends up the same.
 
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