- #1
The story can be really enjoyable at times, but there are many faults. My biggest issue is the shallowness of characters. Besides that, it also feels as if there is a lot of lost potential. It's as if the author uses a time-skip or a Deus-ex-Machina whenever facing difficulty in writing. If I were to sum up how the story feels, it's as if the author is skimming the could-have-been story in order to reach a non-existent plot.