Yumemiru Danshi wa Genjitsushugisha (WN) Chapter 59 Discussion

4/10

It had potential, the story of a young man realizing his mistakes of love bombarding an the consequences it has on himself and the girl? sounds great! a story of growing and allowing oneself to forgive and be forgiven, rtealizing how a toxic home upbringing ant its results, and trying to move pass that? I say it again, it sounds good.

but the reality? this story fails, quite miserably, any grow on the MC doesnt stay, instead he is just a husk of a simp that allows the HORRIBLE (my god I read a bad tsundere but this one takes the prize) girl to walk all over him, without any drop of self respect or care, god it truly makes me mad, as it had a good idea, but a poor execution, except one or two scenes; personally the scene of the cup of water analogy was the best part of this story, only because it was creative.

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MC

a self deprecatting man, posibble depressive thanks to his mother and sister, who BOTH are terrible people, (the sister can go stick her head up her mother ass) at the beggining his grow is interesting, but it quickly returns to the status quo of allowing the annoying female lead to do as she wishes

Female lead (God worst part)

She is one dimensional as a piece of wood, her only characteristic is the amount of selfdoubts and tsun tsun tsun part toward the MC, ever heard the words of milhouse from the simpsons:

"... you don't want me to be with you; you dont want me to be with someone else. How miserable do I ahve to be before you are happy?..."

it applies to her, she only wants the MC for herself, even if she makes him miserable, DOESN'T GROW.

Sister/mother

god awful family members, makes my blood boils at how they treat MC, the sister hastn treat him with kindness to the point that the payback from MC is probably her best moment, but is cut short by that awful female lead, mother? as present as a ghost

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Read it own your own risk, maybe you get invested, but personally? it as bland as a piece of paper stuck on a wood drifting on the ocean