- #1
Written like a small child telling an improvised story. Zero setting descriptives. Blank canvas of a MC, no personality at all, simply a device to deliver dialogue. "Author" tries to give readers whiplash by jumping from event to event with no actual story taking place. Characters can only ever be as intelligent as their author, and all these characters have an IQ lower than room temperature. In short, it is offensively bad, appalling, low-effort tr*sh.