An S-class Adventurer, Banished as the Tank of the Party, Uses His “S*ave Release” Skill To Build the Strongest Country in History! Chapter Ch50 Discussion

some spoilers, but I mean you'll literally get a feeling for the whole novel in a sense

It's rushed, way to rushed. Instead of creating some depth and putting a little more work into the story he gets told "leave" he questions it for one paragraph. Leaves. Is literally miles away without much disagreement within the same chapter. He doesn't talk it over with anyone leaving a trail he's just gone.

shows up in same paragraph miraculously gets the titles's skill and within the next has a s*ave.

Then before the end of the next chapter without prompt the 2nd "heroine"? Is "romantically jealous" of a childhood friend (who he never explained about or talked about his past except for and I quote "she used to run out of magic and I carried her on my back").

In the intermission the "heroine"? questions why but mostly in her own head. Everyone but the hero (2 other people) understand the mc's contributions. What about the other one? No clue. To rushed to tell.

im going to keep reading but I have a feeling nothing is going to change. It's going to be the template. He's going to free s*aves. They will fall in love, but he won't notice. His childhood friend and co. Will slowly notice that they arnt strong anymore and he will not know why and doubt it has to do with the MC. (which everyone else but him will understand) even the "new" party member will A. Be a girl who will follow when the heroine leaves. Or B. Will be a person who will be blamed because they can't do what the MC used to do. And in a long drawn out way they will eventually find the MC. Which will be several times harder to do rather than the half a chapter it took him to leave and find his way to the wilderness (which seems to be on the other side of the world) that's my prediction. Stay tuned.

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Ch. 50

I was slightly wrong. It went somewhat in a different direction, but now it's worse. he's somehow got denser. Someone will constantly mutter something he can't see or talk about something he doesn't understand. There will be contradictions in phrases or information constantly. You get 1 paragraph of plot progression then the rest is females arguing. Or "Alex I want to... no never mind" over and over. To the point now where 3/4 of the chapter is now just making out. So arguing over the MC, making out, plot progression. The maid gets called a "Titty monster".

just leave. Not worth it