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Though I was originally happy to see a story about freeing sl*ves, this was immediately disappointing.Within the first 6 chapters the translation skips wildly between first and third POV. Two female side characters are already in love with the MC while he doesn't know, one of which he met moments before. It's rushing through the events of the story. The world building is nonexistent because Mr. Author is desperately trying to rely on bad fantasy tropes in order to rush into a forced harem of NPC girls without actually considering that "writing" was his job to begin with.That being said, I don't think that the ideas here are all too bad. The MC isn't a anti-social psychopath (that some of you seem to want for some godforsaken reason) and seems to have a moral system. Maybe someone with talent will write something like this? That would be nice.