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What's up with the low rate? Lol This is actually a cute and fluffy story.Spoiler
Though I think there were unresolved mysteries such as the need of someone that could help overcome tragedies of the male lead. Also, the story did not mention anything about giving half of her life aside from the fact that they male lead got better when she arrived. Yes, I know that it was already kind of explained thru the progress that he became well since he became motivated and active, but giving like a line or two or more detailed explanation for his changes might be good.
[collapse]Nevertheless, reading this actually worthwhile. Well, this is just based on my taste.