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love the story, I love the way his power works but the author needs to write dialogue better. 500 chapters in u dont need to explain to me every little thing again.Also your backlog characters give too much exposition in their dialog. For example after MC takes part in a war 30 chapters ago he walks into a guild hall and 2 people are talking about him and one says "yeah he particpated in the spring war that as u know I couldnt participate in because I was injured" this is just a person that that is their only line and only part of the story. Their injury doesnt affect story in any way. And it seemed awkward.Also at 500 chapters in everyone getting shocked by everything he does is s*upid. You cant make someone famous fir being an adventurer with a griffon and then have people not aytomatically recognize them. I mean thats s*upid.