The Paranoid Black Lotus Chapter 28 Discussion

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Omg this novel is so s*upid and cringe 😖 Not to undermine the TL's hard work, but this novel's practically unreadable.

At first I was curious because it got two bad reviews, and after persisting until chapter 28 I decided to put it under DNF status.

Many reasons aside, I wish to highlight the repeated use of infantilism language and slight... Bestiality-ish? I don't know how to put it in proper english but there are instances like 'his little paws', 'his furry head', 'his cute kittenish eyes' used in this hillariously unironical ways. The author was quite serious about putting those phrases whenever ML so much as looked at MC. It was cute at first, but I'd say nope if I see another mention of MC's little paws lol.

My another note is about infantilism, which is just icky. The fact that in his head, ML always called MC as 'this child', or 'his little kid' is just... Eww. Hell no. But maybe it's also caused by MC's childish behaviour. MC was 19 at the time of the story and several years older under his belt after his rebirth but acted like a confused spoiled baby tumbling after his dad.
 
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