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Rating 4.3 stars but rounded up. I like the plot but it seems like it is roughly done. Some important points are not mentioned and some are contradictory.At first it seems convoluted due to several idea putting immediately in the 1st 10 chapters. It becomes okay at the middle-ending of the story (but some flaws are noticeable). Overall it is good but unpolished.Spoiler
ML really forced the MC physically in the 1st world/ original setting. But in the next paragraph the ML suddenly showed concern when the MC committed su*cide saying they were tricked.
It is mentioned that there is voice MC is hearing urging him to die, but it is not mentioned about the MLs side.
It's like from being a scum the ML suddenly becomes an ideal protagonist in the nxt paragraph showing concern.
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