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At first the direction of the plot is quiet good, but overtime it becomes very messy. The author kept adding things here and there so suddenly, just so that MC have something to do, and then resumes the story just like that. And many times, I found that everything is somewhat illogical. I mean, the concept of transmigration & system itself is not logical, but except from that the author should've wrote according to common sense so that every part of the story can integrate normally.For example, there is only 10 breeder in the entire empire excluding MC? wtf? It makes MC looks OP, yes. But how's that possible? Is the empire's population so little and weak that they only have 10 breeder? Also, MC done things too smoothly. If MC can, why other people cannot? It doesn't make any sense.The most nonesensicial part that I'm currently reading is when MC joined the egg custard-making competition via live broadcast. WTF, egg custard. This! I need explanation for this. Also, that crispy salted chicken. It's just frying, but no one knows the concept of deep frying? The MC just casually make a VERY EASY, SIMPLE dishes and the audience seems to be very, very amazed. And the story said that it's the first crispy salted chicken ever (the heck?), before the blue star (earth, maybe?) planet's dishes is lost. MC's ability is definitely fcking ordinary. But the author make other people so uncapable and idiotic that there's no choice for them except to worship MC who's ordinary-but-in-their-eyes, -is-very-much-like-a-god.Another thing. I hate that this story is so slow-paced. For example, one chapter, they said that four days later MC's nursery school will be opened for the first time. But after that, I felt like there is so many things happened in those length of time that I thought that it's been months.Author made no explanation about MC's previous life, the original body's traitorous deed (there is but very little), and also about how the blue star's dishes and food ingredient became lost. Even base ingredient like eggs have to be cloned and that cloned egg taste like plastic. Wtf? And when MC make egg custard with that cloned egg, it taste good? what? even if there is golden finger, I think it should'nt be like thatಠ_ಠAnd actually, at first the plot idea is very good and promising. It's just broken halfway.The ML cat and MC interaction is very fluffy. That is the only thing I like. MC's attitude towards ML is... meh. This made me pity ML very much, even though his attitude is not really likeable.Anw, I'm not good at explaining, sorry. You should just read it urself. I'm gonna drop this for now. U are welcome to read, maybe u'll like this novel more than me.