- #1
The MC are all over the place and wimpy as hell. Totally contradictory with his previous personality when he doesn't know yet that he is the villain before his rebirth. How can he changed 360° from brazen character into a timid mouse. And there's so much monologue by the author making the plot seems stagnant. Totally unnecessary. And sometimes the MC is so pathetically s*upid, he has a wholesome family that cares about him and they would have solve the problem of marriage with more grace than the MC who attempt to send a s*upid letter to the queen. I just think the author trying to make the MC as a free spirited character but ended up looking like a spoilt brat who is narrow minded especially when he had fought with that Abner villain, even Mary sue would be ashamed with his ideas of handling the fight, so s*upid. ML is like NPC player here who a very powerful person maybe more so than the royal family but can't even count on his team to investigate the MC properly l. ML don't even know the MC age until the second time they slept together. Man, the standard for every chapter getting lower and lower. Enough for me getting all work out to vent here.