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Its too edgy for me. I don't consider myself a squeamish person but this fic really goes in on the human experimentation thing. When they introduced Spoiler
cancer into one of the main plot points
[collapse] I knew it's gonna be a rather sensitive fic.Apart from the MC being unlikeable there really isn't many faults so far. At the very least it's readable. The other bad things is just preference. Like Spoilerwagging his tail for Danzo
[collapse] no matter what plan he has that's annoying.