- #1
The characters act and especially talk stilted and weird. The writing doesn't make sense "Oh there's a women who couldn't be older than 20 it must be this person" one chapter latter... "she was at a good level for only being 15". Everything that happens is dumb and written in a way that makes it painful to read. MC gives a candy to a girl who is hanging around with one of the most powerful people in the world in disguise. They then decide to become his servants.