Developing Superpowers in Another World Chapter 265 Discussion

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It's a good novel.

The world is interesting, it's set in a dystopian slightly cyberpunkish world mixed with dimensional travels and apocalyptic super powers (think zombie cores with a cultivator twist).

The MC is nicely written, not all of her facets comes out during the story as her main focus is surviving while gaining the strength to do so. She can be hilarious, goofy and funny. She's generally kind but also ruthless.

I think she's a tad bit too flawless however. These novels tend to ignore the mental impact of the character finding themselves in such a situation and i'd like to see more of her mental struggles to adapt and then a character growth where she improves from a former student looser to what she becomes later on. Some inner monologue showing insecurities etc would be cool. Oh well.

The world building can come off as abit messy, but alot of it is explained through the MC's eyes and thoughts.

I give it a 4 because this is the kind of story where proper character growth (mentally and otherwise) with setbacks and other such things would have improved the story and the MC's character alot.

However I do recommend people to give it a try.
 
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