I, the Sacrifice, Somehow Killed the Evil God (WN) Chapter 54 Discussion

  • Thread starter KingYama17
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Bad fast-pacing, cringey developments, female characters lusts for MC way too fast, yep that's correct lust not love. POV changes have bad timings. There are very few descriptions of the places so its hard for me to imagine what kind of place MC has been into. And so far any characters has no likable traits, or maybe everything is too generic.
 
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