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Honestly, the first 75 to 100 chapters were good. From then on it starts to go down hill.There was a great family dynamic at first but then the writer focuses only on the 2nd son to the point it's like the eldest kid dropped off the map. The initial silly attitude of the 2ns child quickly turns into an annoyance. Though it seems the writer realised this and slowly integrated the rest of the family back into the plot.The development of the side characters quickly becomes an oversight later on. It is hardly touched at all and very brief. And the writers skips a lot of details in the world building. For example, how does cultivation work? How does pill refining work? What are the different abilities? How do you gain techniques? A lot of these things just pop up and we, the readers, have to accept it and move on. In fact, the initial elemental abilities seems to become redundant as spirit roots take the main stage.Later the plot gets lazy and just says this and that happened.After they move to the bigger continent, the story has its ups and downs. It picks up and stagnates.Spoiler
on e thing that itched me the wrong way was the romance plot the writer decided to build for the still silly SIX YEAR OLD second son. I know the MC's original soul had a child by 13 or 14 but couldn't the writer wait till the kid was at least ten before they started hinting at these crushes?
[collapse]Past 200 chapters, the story is difficult to read. At this point, the main characters are no longer the main characters of the story! They sit on the sideline instead and the plot moves on to focus on a completely unexpected small side characters while the main characters provide comedic relief.Past 300, it's just rinse and repeat. Nothing interesting anymore. Oh maybe you might like to read about the kids now.