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Overall this story has a good plot, although the theme at the beginning of the story seems a bit changed too suddenly, it's all still acceptable.Spoiler
At first this story was described with the theme of Agriculture, Business, and light cultivation, but as the story progresses, it turns into the theme of pursuing cultivation to become immortal.
[collapse]The weakness of the story itself may lie in the author's slightly ambiguous pov description??? This can be seen from the author's depiction who sometimes shifts the pov in the story from the MC to other characters.Honestly it's really make the story become messed up, because this made the position of the MC (Main Character's) itself unclear.Meanwhile, for some characters who suddenly disappear... to be honest, this is a natural thing considering that this is a cultivating novel where everyone's age is different, depending on the abilities of each character.Maybe if there's a character hole, it's in the MC's grandkids which doesn't have a clear ending??? like they are only briefly depicted and then just disappear which doesn't really make sense considering the MC's family has a really great feelings for each other.So it doesn't make sense for MC and his children to forget their own lineage.