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Interesting premise, lackluster execution.Do not use your brain if you want to enjoy this novel.Do not read this if you expect horror, there's none at all.A prime example of "Tell, don't show". The battle scenes consisted of people shouting fictional skill names to each other.It would be better if author can decide if he wants MC to treat the 2 middle schoolers as love interests or as children, and then adjusted their age accordingly. So far MC had bathed and spanked one of the girl. This girl is said to look like 3rd year of middle school (so around 14 or 15 years old), which is not a kid at all. I think at that age even a father wouldn't touch their daughter casually, much less the 20 years old young man MC.Typical I-want-to-be-low-key, then proceed to do things the most high profile way possible. Then act clueless, "oh no, why is everyone's reaction is like that?"