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I read the authors work: THE STRONGEST LEGEND OF DRAGON BALL before this and I gotta say this one is better paced, but If I had to choose between the two id prefer the other over this story here.This story is good, great even when compared to most of that crap ive read on this website, but there is romance in this story (if you want to call it that) and most of these authors along with their readers are virg*ns that have never even seen sunlight and have never known the touch of a woman. The closest thing they have had was their waifu body pillow. So of course, just like many stories ive read before this, the romance is full on cringe and the women in the story all walk all over the men around them and you will read the occasional "Women are scary" cliches. Luckily in this authors stories the women don't walk all over the MC and they aren't some cardboard cutout of weak and useless Sakura from Naruto either. They are strong and useful, but don't try to take the spotlight from the MC. Between the authors two dragonball stories we have some common themes im not a fan of as well. Spoiler
Both stories our MC spawns into the world with a little sister that ends up becoming his wife later and it's so obvious from the start that she's put there purely to become the future wife and it would be way less boring if he found his wife later in the story imo. Another similarity is the fact that the MC always makes s*upid wishes with the dragonballs. The MC also has a very biased hate towards Vegeta and Vetega seems to be a constant joke in both of the authors stories. Vegeta was the most hardworking character in dragonball with the most character development as well and didn't deserve how the author wrote him TWICE.
[collapse]Ill be honest, aside from the romance and a few other little things, this is a decent story worth reading if you have a lot of time to kill or just want something to read.