- #1
Honestly.... the ending left me baffled wondering what the hell is going on. It felt like reading two different stories altogether. There's no wife chasing crematorium nor a get together with a new guy, this is plain MC being betrayed and trying to pull himself together after realizing having his trust and love being threw aside like that (which he succeed to a degree! Love him for that!) Probably because of its length, the development has nowhere to go and instead left hanging just like that; there isn't any proper closure (abrupt even), not even a proper introduction/inclusion of a potential ML to the story? Maybe it's just me. I had more expectations for the story.