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I enjoyed the settings and the story up to about chapters 80-100s when things took a turn, Spoiler
The story went from a cute maid raising her duchess (with the occasionally needed action and fighting scenes of course) to unconsented 18+ mind break with a minor involved. I do not mind the R-18 tag or the BD*M tag but what bothered me is that there's no tag for the nonconsensual s*xual act. As well as the fact that the maid is now literally a s*ave, having no control over her bodily anatomy due to the necklace on the duchess.
[collapse]I really did enjoy the character setting and theme the author has going: transmigration into a novel, maid and her duchess yuri, the maid's mysterious background, training arc, plot around the "real" heroine of the novel but small but MULTIPLE loopholes in the story that built up over time (chapter 105-106 was the worst point) ruined the novel for me.Personally, the novel became unreadable for me, but if people can accept this type of plot conflict (mentioned in the spoilers) then go for it, it is still a good read if you have nothing else to read. I just wished the author could've refined the story more and developed the relationship between the MC and FL in a healthy direction. It would've been more readable as a no-brain shitty-plot smut novel.SpoilerPoor Senior Lani, the only sane character who died without contributing anything meaningful to the plot. Only a few drops of tears contribute to the MC and FL's relationship as cannon fodder.
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