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5 stars with some reservations.My biggest problem with the story is that succubus is a loli. This was unneeded and the story wouldn't have been hurt by having her older or the relationship be less of a s*xual nature. Thankfully what s*x there was, was minor and hinted at. It's a shame because the rest of the story is very wholesome.Bottom Line: a good short read if you can overlook the issue.