While I Was In The Hospital For A Terminal Illness, A Devil Claiming To Be A Drop-out Visited Me, So I Made A Contract With Her Out Of Pity But For Some Reason, She Would Not Take My Soul As Payment Chapter Completed Discussion

  • Thread starter Loneclown
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  • #1
5 stars with some reservations.

My biggest problem with the story is that succubus is a loli. This was unneeded and the story wouldn't have been hurt by having her older or the relationship be less of a s*xual nature. Thankfully what s*x there was, was minor and hinted at. It's a shame because the rest of the story is very wholesome.

Bottom Line: a good short read if you can overlook the issue.
 
  • #2
pathetic story Sylvia has to go back to an abusive husband. who slaps her 60 times and breaks off her leg yet she doesn't go get help from the law.  plz don't spread that domestic violence is ok. it's not ok it's against the law
 
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