- #1
It's been quite literally average, though I'm not sure if it's due to the translation or the author's writing.The idea on how the elements work is definitely unique and deserves credit-- but the writing style negates both emotion and immersion by making you read it mechanically.A lot of opportunities missed by not building up the world. Many more missed by not building up the MC.They could have seriously made this a 4 star novel if they took some time to think about the emotion of the character.It's still early, but I'm not expecting much.
