Seoul Object Story Chapter 80 Discussion

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The story was good. But the only downside is that there was no control on the fluff limit. For example it had a heavy focus on cuddling the Reaper, now this might have been good on visual media but this is a novel, not a visual novel, not an audio novel, but a novel written in words. In novels it's hard to have a visual impact on the Audience.

So, even if Yeri cuddling the reaper might look cute in the Author's mind and on visual media, it feels really wierd because what I get in this novel is the conceptual image of an adult woman childishly cuddling a downsized old man
 
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