Breakup Gift Chapter oneshot Discussion

  • Thread starter lucifer_2805
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I liked the writing, would have been better had it been a longer story. The opening ending wasn't the problem, more like, I didn't know what was happening at the end. It was a little unclear whose perspective it was at the end.
 
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