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It was good at the start. But then it went downhill.It feels like the descriptions are lacking in a way. I don't know how to describe it accurately (which isn't a good thing, considering I write things too lol). But it just feels very fast-paced, and the MC glosses over things, and not enough perspectives are shown. Like a character is introduced by some weird description from the MC, said character is first stunned by MC's actions, then amazed/impressed, and then the character shows up like once in a blue moon after that. The characters are only memorable by specific features and not personalities. There's a lack of depth, I think, is what I'm getting at.The way the MC describes things is also.... weird. It's very "tell" vs "show", if you know what I mean. Yes, that's not always a bad thing, but if that's how you're going to describe like all the fight scenes... yeah.... I don't know why I read so much of this.I think I'm going to drop it here. Ciao.