- #1
My opinion is that the concept is new and refreshing (I was fully excited for an op but fun mc), the author is trying their best, but perhaps... the writing is slightly inexperienced. The author lacks a good editor for pacing and unnecessarily long descriptions of appearances and less stereotypical character lines. It's not quite am exciting read, but it's a comfortable read in the sense that you can expect nothing amazing yet also know that everything is going to be fine to continue along.The writing feels vaguely juvenile only bc I think the author lacks experience on how to truly make the readers feel like the MC / ML are badasses without explicitly being like "yes check us out we're so badddd" vibe (it's better than that but that's just the vibe I feel) / plot points where the progression is not super logical but quite obviously produced, but still in acceptable range for a degree of enjoyment. The author is trying their best... and you can feel it. A decent mid read imo.