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Well, I think that the amnesia thing is too convoluted of a reason to prolong the story. I can't fathom why the hick the ML didn't notice something's wrong with his ex when they met again 4 years later.Even a new reader like me knows that there's something off about the MC's behavior towards the ML, let alone someone who used to be in a relationship with him. At this point I'm convinced that the author's just throwing the amnesia plot for the word count *rolls eyes*Just make it an entertainment omegaverse story and it's already interesting enough for readers who like those tropes.