Daily Life After Marriage in the 1960s Chapter 14 Discussion

The story wasn't really well written. I just reached chapter 14 but I noticed some details that makes me need to read the passage twice, even going back to the previous chapter. Even from the very first chapter, I got confused because earlier she was actually got knocked out at her home, but then suddenly the setting changed to a ward. There's really no passage saying that she was previously moved to the hospital. Spoiler

Then another instance, the aunt actually came to visit FL's house, apparently with a young man, but the author didn't even state he was there. He was suddenly there, giving comments and ramblings after the aunt finished talking. THEN another detail, it was told that FL's and her brother slept early, so she woke up early too the next day to wash her hair, and at the exact same day when she was asked about her decision on the marriage, author stated that she had been thinking about it ALL NIGHT???

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It really made me overthink lol

Also her character... I think the author is kinda unable to decide her character setting? There's a chapter when she had an argument with a clerk that escalated fast, Spoiler

but when it ended and FL and ML were outside, she laughed hard because of the clerk face after being confronted by the ML... won't you still get annoyed after an argument even though you're not wrong and winning? I'd really not in the mood to laugh after an intense argument though...

[collapse] it's like not deep, real enough.

Maybe I confused things because I read too fast, but even the earliest chapter already made me raised my eyebrows. But no harm, just gonna ignore the small details.