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It's pretty good, the MC is nice, I like the main goal, the family's nice.It's pretty good all around I hope it doesn't go to crapRead at valhala tls for the chapters they have a lot more chapters than shownSpoiler
it just got revealed that the MC has all attributes so im a little worried for the SUPER GIGA OP level MC we might have and along with that the plot contrivances and holes that could happen to challenge the MC like a 1k year old secret society that is really into a tentacle dog with a beard god or something
[collapse]Update 1: chapter 23: I have noticed that the translation is a bit jarring and for what ever reason I'm clever is added into sentences for no reason. Current rating 4.7 so it's still a 5Upade 2: chapter 31: the story is good but as I pay attention to the sentences (I don't do that normally) I realize that the translation is bad. An editor is also very needed as there was a scene where the MC asks a question and the person he was talking to replied with thank you then something elsefor whatever reason, who replies with thank you in a question. And from 1 sentance to another I can change from the MC to his sister to his friendnrandomly. It's small but that was really jarring also the fact that the perspective can suddenly change from 1st to 3rd person for no reason. Its most likely a problem with the tl and not the author. It's a good story. But I want my opinion of it to stay that way so im dropping it since from what I can tell it's going to go to a cliche story if it keeps going the way I'm thinking it.