He Doesn’t Know I’m Dead Chapter 1 Discussion

It was a good concept but the transition between flashbacks and present life were whacky. The flow of the words was broken. Too bad, the plot was a certified tear jerker. Still it had its good points

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Also the whole dream sequence was weird and pointless. Maybe the author wanted ML to suffer more??Isn't it more painful to live with the knowledge that the one person they loved was hurt to the point of taking away their own life ??Seeing them with someone else doesn't even compare??

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