- #1
The writing is like a toddler is telling you a story, it feels totally immature and very jumpy.The first subordinate behaves like if MC is made of glass, their interactions is similar to a oversensitive and overcautious mom watching over her MC child who instead of talking to you as any adult, it gives you "the look" and procedes to show how amazing they supposedly act, but it isn't amazing, MC is suppose to be the best in the game but keep behaving like a kid and forgetting newbie knowledge.If this were an anime, it would be the same as watching how MC wastes time for 4 whole chapters full of explosions and "thrill" just for him to remember basic characteristics of their enemy, as if newbie monsters were a BOSS or something.His subordinates talk about how amazing MC is, while he doesn't show any power, or any acknowledgement of how useless MC is. Nothing worst than reading subordinates constantly bootlicking and being overcautious over a loser MC.
