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Good story, great translator, but a big flaw..The story develops exclusive from the MC character perspective, which by itself it's not an issue.But since there is no world narrative or side stories, everything that the author wants the readers to understand have to be conveniently implemented in the dialogues of other characters or inner thoughts from the MC.Sadly the Author handicapped himself really bad with this, as he doesn't have the ability to carry this kind of writting without making third-rate enemies or forced conversation.The story ends up having a lot of weird and unnatural interactions because of it.-Enemies having to openly say why they are surprised, what each of their skills do (Which is awfully common in the story), why their plan failed, what are their intentions, etc-Everyone with no exception will info dump everything they know about anything. (Again, it's so common that it becomes really unnatural in some circumstances) -Characters would have unnatural conversations between them, just to let the MC and readers know what they are talking about. (Like: Hey remember that thing we have been doing everyday for many years? Where the basics of it consists of this and that, and we are aiming to obtain X?) That said it's still an excellent story. But if you care about that details, you will find it pretty annoying.